Friday 30 January 2015

Book - 3rd Edit

In this third version of this book, I have removed the cover photo as it does not fit in with the rest of the images, and will be replaced in the upcoming fourth edit. Following the feedback I've revived I have made sure that this version only includes the fans with the title of the book suitably re-named as 'On the Terraces'. I have added a second section however to add something else I noticed whilst editing images. The boisterous away fans are interesting to photograph as they are typically more lively than home support. The images included are strong but are not enough in terms of numbers to include in their own section. Further editing of images shot throughout the season is required since it has been difficult to shoot more photography since Christmas. The sequencing of this edit was to try and start off with younger fans and develop it into the older generations, finishing with the away fans, but this doesn't really workout as there is a sudden jump, so I think sequencing with thought towards the subjects gaze & lighting situations will be required in the next edit. With this thin edit of images it might also be worth only having one image on a double page spread, on the right hand side to pro long this book and less cluttered for the viewer. maybe having portrait images on the far left still in full bleed every few pages.

http://issuu.com/lewismitchell/docs/book_version_3/1

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